The second movie that I am gong to evaluate is tiffany’s movie. I really enjoyed the beginning of your movie. The first commercial with who’s ever little sister that was one of the funniest thing that I have ever scene in my life. I also liked your cut scenes with the cool purple or was it pink on black letters that explained what was going on in your movie.
I was able to understand what you were trying to get at in your movie. For me it was very hard to follow. That could have just been me but I think it would have been much better with out the cut scenes and there were some parts where I could not hear what you were saying.
Over all I think your movie was a solid experience and I would watch it again with out a doubt. I wish I could of read your script before I watched your movie because I feel that it would of made it a lot more understandable. Thank you for making your movie and showing it to the class it was a very good movie.

That Millennium (haha) show was a very high quality movie from most aspects. There filming by the great Joe was superb. There acting was second to no other and there general grasp of humor was right on the money. There was only one problem I had with this movie and that is the poor sound quality during two scenes in the movie. The streaking punishment scene and the giving of the final scene. If these two scenes had a higher quality of video and sound I believe that the movie could win an award.
Through out the movie there were scenes of suspense, climax, and resolution which was a great thing to do even if they were asked to. The movie was even funny in the serious scenes. This movie was an all out comedy and the people that wrote it are complete geniuses and should go pro in filming. All in all I think that it was the best movie in the class strictly for the comedy factor and I think it deserves the highest grade possible.

ohh geeze last blog :)

soo im listening to glomorous how sad is that... well i really think that our story is gonna be so sweet i am so pumped to film it. That story is so perfect. I really liked the idea and i think this is the most fun that i have ever had doing a project in a lonng time and i really think that we will be able to get the whole script done by friday i think that it is definetly possible. Life is a draggggg homework stress school.... i have offically decided to not let it get to me. I figure that if i dont let stress effect me that i will be happier and that life will be more of a joy to live. Although life is a joy right now it could be better in some aspects. hmm the lions better not draft a wr we wasted 3 picks on them and look at where that got us i know its pretty sad isnt it. well that is basically it this is my 32 blog so i am done for a week or so leave me some damn comments i will deff return the favor ppeaceeeeeeeeeee. WHALERS TONIGHT.

MIC

Yeah if i had a mic i would tell the world that trying to type 20 + pages is impossible in 3 days of class time. I would also say that we will get our script done and that i am pretty mad at MIKE FOR TRYING TO GET CALLED OUT EARLY. But yeah i also would tell the world that life is to short and work is highly over rated. Stress will kill you and you need to live life care free. Well yeah life is to short to be scared and to try new things so my final point is that you need to live life to the fullest and not sweat the small things.

goals

I have a new goal for this class. That goal is to not walk out early. I did not realize that when i walk out i put my teacher in jeopardy. I plan on completing this goal by blogging until i turn blue. There is nothing that my teacher Ms. E could do to help me complete this task. I only want the burden to be on myself. Another goal is to make the best video that this world has ever seen. My group consists of three other people besides myself. They are Mike R, Colin A, Mike B, (i think he is back with his girlfriend. haha that is good news. Hmm yes this movie will be made with hard work and consistent effort. There is one thing that Ms. E could do to help our group to performer at its best and that little this is..... NOTHING. I feel that our group is very self sufficient we are the best on this earth now i am done bye have fun reading colin.

Cocaine energy drink

Cocaine is the new fuel for my life... The energy drink of course. It has three time the kick of red bull and makes you burn on the inside. I don't really like drinking it because i think i am going to die when i do. On another note i haven't posted for about a week of so so i felt that i was do for a nice long post. I also hear that when i get back to school that i will be suspended for a day which is to bad but i will make do. I think that i will end up working all that day so then i may earn a good 100$ to furthermore pay off my father from that accident that i got into. On another note Florida was boring it was cold and rainy... I had three nice days though it was sunny and hot for 3 of 7 days. The last day i stayed in a hotel on the beach and talked to all the fine ladies. Met some girls from cinci they were cool. It was to bad that my friend didn't inform me that they were in the room next to them..... jerk. Other than the fifty year old dude that tried to smoke a doubie with us the trip was rather boring except for some fun nights and kick A** food man we ate like kings. On the way home i ended up driving for 14 out of the 18 hours that sucked i was up for like 21 hours straight. well that's not all but i have to go do better things just thought you would like an update peace.

The Turning point

This was a great day in red wing hockey history. This is then the Colorado avalanche and the red wings faces off in a grudge match after claude lemioux broke cris drapers jaw with a cheap hit. During thuis game both the teams got into a huge braul where daren mccarty kicked claud's A** and this is what most people think gave the redwings the momemtum to win the stanly cup that year. I still feel that this was a great day in history. our hate has since faded but we have establised a new hate for nashville which is good ok i am now done for the day!

So i went into court for that accident that i got into and it was a good day.. WHAT IS LOVE? well the cop totally dismissed the ticket and that gave me an extra bill to spend in florida on things that cannot be mentioned on this blog. YESSS i am so happy that i got out of the ticket. I am now wearing colins hat but it is wayyy to small for me.... that is ok tho because this is my work for the dasy and now i am going to go play some winter bells. YESSSSSSSSSS high score time.

yeah today was a good day! no alcohol which is a crazy event because today was a half day. all in all i am proud of myself. Another thing i didnt have today is red bull i love red bull its the fule for life. it gives me the kick in the *** that i need to get through the day. it almost killed me today also i was rather upset that i could nto work on my blogs orrrrrrrr play winter bells today in class. ne ways after our super long half day of school i decided to chill and go over to a friends house. ther we lit off rockets anf from there we came back to my house to work on our projects for archi. after that we shot off a potato launcher that was verry funny i am not gonna lie. Tomarrow i have to go to court for that accident i got in not to excited abou tthat but it has to be done. by the way you can hear me before you see me i got king kong in my trunk that is also why im hot and you shouldnt touch my money because it is very dear to me. This is my last blog that i have to write and it basically makes me happy. because i have wrote about 4 this week wait no i have wrote 5 to marrow is 1246 that s a goooood day pretty much the best besides 1356 thats my second fav. did you know that im the reason that crack turned from cocaine its the truth i know its hard to believe i hope ms. e doesnt make me delete this... it took me three time to spell delete if i were to loose this i would be mad. so now i am really done now
im pumped woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo done as of right now. now i am clicking publish bye.

blog 4 of 8

this is my last blog of the day. I am so glad that i only have 4 more to go after this. Tommarrow is deff a good day. Tomarrow is a good day because it is a half day and i have to do nothing all day. Well i really would like to have a winterbells tourney in this class. Music is life. Not really. Half days are a waste of time. We should have no school No one really wants to come and most people dont cam this is going to end my bloging for the day end of blog 4 yesssssssssssssss only 4 more to go.

3 of 8

This is number 3 yessss and i only have to do one more for todaty and colin has to do about 8 more hahahahahahahhahahaha. and mrs e just screwed up colins b club oppertunity he had 2 bill he is so mad but it was just so perfect. i really want to play a game of winterbells. it is so icy out side i am so sad wait its not icy its snowy. The roads were so bad its not really that good of a thing yeah this is like yeah blog number 3 and all i have to do is one more for today. yesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss soo yeah this is the end.

2 of 8

i am happy to announce that i only have seven more b-logs to go this is good news. I also decided to skip the game of winter bells and just get the writing out of the way. Well i really cant wait till i can play another game of winter bells. I hear ciara on someones head phones. And i have decided to say that working week nights would suck. this ends blog 2 of 8 not i have 6 to go.

sadg

Winter bells and florida have gotten me into a big hole. I am very sad to say i need to write 4 blogs a day to meet my goal. Poor colin has to write 18 blogs or so i am so sad for him. This is so cool i love blogs and i just checked in with ms. e for my project and signed up for a display date. yay i am so pumped this leaves 7 more blogs to go and now i get to play a game of winter bells.

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winterbells

This game is obsessing it takes up class time. Once you start you just cant stop. I hate it when teachers tell me when i can and cannot play winter bells i also hate it when you get 9 billion and no one believes you. Like effen mike and Colin. Mike b saw it and he will not tell the truth he is a jerk. I am about to cry. I was so proud to get 9 billion. This score was the best thing that ever happened to me in school. Ms. E constantly tells me that i cant play games. what she doesn't realize is that winter bells is an addiction. Once you start you need to beat you score. I have decided to admit my self into rehab. I do not know where this rehab station is, but i know i need it. GAMES CAN KILL and i need to stop, but not today maybe next week but not today.

pantoum

As i stumble through the darkness
watching the stars glitter in the sky
my daughter is alone, but not lonely
She is playing with her dollies

Watching the stars glitter in the sky
searching for answers to questions
she is playing with her dollies
I know she is content with what she owns

Searching for the answer to questions
my daughter is alone, but not lonely
I know she is content with what she owns
As i stumble though the darkness

HECK this is pretty bad but i made an attempt

who is home? yeah im home i have soooo much to say but no energy to say it. basically i have been up for about 30 hours with about 2 hours of sleep. soo i was in florida for about 2 weeks 16 days to be exact. I cant even fathom how much make up work i am going to have, but if my teachers are being jerks when i get back and tell me i cant make up work i am officially going to go to second and 6th hour and call the rest of them quits. Yeah im gonna go shower and maybe take a nap. yes a nap would be nice

FLORIDA

Sonnet

Death is the end. The earth is cold and wet.
There are tears running down sad pale faces.
A person lying in a coffin with black shoe laces.
Places and people that he has never met.
The room is full to the brim, and all the tables have been set.
In all the corners there are flowers in vases.
All are sad and morning, but are going through the paces.
He is dead and gone and for him there is no returning.
And for some this is most disconcerting,
But for me there is hope not hurting.
For those who believe in God our maker
There is life ever after in heaven up above.
Jesus Christ my hope, my father I love,
Sacrificed so that I will one day see God’s great acre.

FLORIDA

Sonnet

Death is the end. The earth is cold and wet.
There are tears running down sad pale faces.
A person lying in a coffin with black shoe laces.
Places and people that he has never met.
The room is full to the brim, and all the tables have been set.
In all the corners there are flowers in vases.
All are sad and morning, but are going through the paces.
He is dead and gone and for him there is no returning.
And for some this is most disconcerting,
But for me there is hope not hurting.
For those who believe in God our maker
There is life ever after in heaven up above.
Jesus Christ my hope, my father I love,
Sacrificed so that I will one day see God’s great acre.

So i just finished working on my bathroom once again. That's basically my life once i get home from school. In all of this there is some good news were almost done! Uhhh my poor little cousin's hockey team lost on sat, it was to bad they kinda played like shit though. I cant believe that i am going to Florida on Tuesday or Wednesday... basically i cant wait. My mom thinks i smoke the reefer but i don't... it makes me mad that she has absolutely no trust in me. BUT yeahhhhh I'm so hungey soo i am gonna go get some foood PEACE

I'm in a really good mood! first time in like.... i have been in a good mood ever since Monday morning! I am sooo happy that i have this class it is the best class i have. Ms. E best teacher ever... i am glad you had fun at winter fest! yeah I'm pretty pumped for this short story that was just a grand idea. Below is something i wrote a little while ago.

Throughout you life there are many boundaries and obstacles that need to be overcome to succeed and accomplish you goals. When you face obstacles in life it can be very hard to surmount them and it requires a great deal of work ethic. I have had many situations where it became evident that i needed to work hard to complete my goals and succeed in life. Here are some of my many situations that show my wonder full work ethic.
In ninth grade i was struggling to make Walled Lake Centrals junior varsity ice hockey team. In order to overcome this obstacle i had to work out and practice daily. While practicing i would also have to not fall behind in my school work because that would also make me fall short of my goal. After weeks of hard work and determination i stepped on the ice for tryouts. It was cold in the rink that gloomy afternoon and it seemed surreal how many other players were there. Coach Lis blew the whistle and we were off skating drills, passing drills, and shooting drills all to evaluate our skills. It all became a blur with players whirling around the ice like on a highway. Then finally the final whistle blew and coach started to call names. One name went by, two names went by, three names went by, then finally it happened coach called my name. I was so ecstatic
In eleventh grade i was in an honors world literature class. This class was very difficult for me, but i tried my best. Before i knew it the end of the year was upon me and that meant a final exam was coming soon. I was excited to hear that Mrs. Terry Carlson my teacher had decided to do a class project instead of a final exam. That day in class she handed out the rubric walking row by row. When i got the instruction sheet i was flabbergasted at how easy the project seem and pushed it to the back of my mind considering that we still had two weeks left to complete it. Night after night something more important than my final exam would arise until i realized i only had two days left to complete this project. That's when i realized what a big mistake procrastinating was! I worked hour after hour, read story after story, and typed page after page until this fifteen page project was completely finished. It wasn't till my head finally hit the pillow at two A.M. that i realized how much i had procrastinated and what a mistake it was. I also then realised then how easy it would of been to have given up and accepted a sub par grade on that project. My work ethic is what pulled me through, without it i would of been sunk and would of never gotten the project finished.
This past summer i realized that i needed to get a car, but i had no money in the bank. I then applied at countless businesses until i found a job with a construction company. I worked forty hour weeks all summer at 9 dollars an hour. I worked till my face turned blue. This took the most work ethic that i have ever used. There were days when i just wanted to quit, i was physically, emotionally, and mentally exhausted. When i wanted to quit i would just focus on the car that i wanted and it would help me dwell up the energy that i needed to complete the task. It it wasn't for my amazing work ethic i would of never been able to get my ninety seven Ford Ranger by the end of the summer.
Work ethic is an important aspect in every ones life and it is one of the most important qualities that any person can have. It helped me make the junior varsity hockey team, Complete my work literature project in only one night, and get my ninety seven ford ranger in only one summer. Through all of my hard times and overcoming my obstacles that have arose my work ethic has been a major factor in me succeeding along with my overall mental strength.

This is basically the worst thing i have ever wrote... and it is basically the reason why i think that there is no possible way that i will get into state. The sad thing is almost none of it is true ha ha good thing they don't know that! this isn't the final copy either thank god way to many errors! well I'm off to do some math.

ohhh canada... i went there today with my church. Yeahhhh we went curling that was the most fun i have had in a while. In gereral if sounds so boring, but that was just awsome and im thinken feild trip to canada to go curling ms. e i bet it would be fun. I also have decided that to border patroll is almost a joke. I coule of smuggled at least 10 pounds of tree back to the states... but yeah today was fun and i really dont feel very good soo this took me enough time and i am still thinking about a topic for my short story it deffff needs to be good.

open letter

An open letter
To Alcohol

January 29, 2007


Dear Alcohol,

I would like to thank you for all of the great times you have helped me to have over the years. You have been there when I was down, when I hurt, and when I wanted to have a good time. From the first time you touched my lips I knew that we were meant for each other.

From the Jager that I had at that hockey tournament, to the vodka I had at my friend’s house before the Michigan game. You have helped me have some of the best times of my life. Over the years you have showed me how you can hurt me by giving me bad hangovers, stupidity, and vomiting. All those things are bad, but I am glad that they happened to me. They opened my eyes to what life could be like and you helped me to make new friends and get into new situations that I wouldn’t have if it weren’t for you.

Although you have given some bad experiences you have helped me get thorough the boring nights where there was nothing else better to do. I am truly grateful when I say thank you for all of the things you have done for me. You were there when I needed you. I was there when you needed me. Things are just getting out of hand.

This is why I am sad to say were through. Some time in the future you may get back into my life, like in college or when I am of age, but until then I am done with you. I hate you, but not really. Although you are the ruin or demise for some people you help me to unleash my inner self that people don’t normally see. So I am going to put you back on the shelf for a few, I am going to let some other people pass you around and have the fun for awhile. Thank you for everything again I love you I hope we meet again one day in the somewhat near future.


Thanks, Bro,
Max Trowbridge

good weekend so far

Ahh another night of picking up the ladies at B-dubs..... Great night, Nope no underage drinking ms. e i told you I'm clean. Yeahhh on the other hand i just made plans for midwinter break i am sooo pumped. I'm taking a Chicky friend to Florida. This has the making of the best trip ever. now its time for a story

Well no I'm not gonna write a story considering the fact that every time i have. in fact i think i will just ramble on. That's the name of a zeppelin son. Zeppelin is one of the greatest bands of all time its to bad there not around any more. Along with zeppelin these Pink Floyd, The doors, and Metallica. Maybe its just my bands but VH1 thinks kinda the same way ohh you cant forget black sabbath.... Ozzy is sooo messed up its to bad you cant understand a think the poor crack head says..... i like putting dots after things... haha dots who ever has read this far needs to stop because they Polly think i am the most messed up kid ever if they didn't already think that. I'm watching future weapons on discovery channel its really cool robot helicopter that kill ppl crazy stuff mannn. ohhh jeez I'm done GOOD NIGHT

Squirt bottles are very delightful, but they bring out the worst sides in people. For instance the most kind hearted person in the world will feel the need to squirt someone just to see the sheer terror face when they get hit with the cold blast of water. That all i have to say about that.

There once was a turtle who lived in a log down by the river. This turtle was a small fellow in fact all of his turtle friends made fun of him when the would play basket ball on the lily pads. All of his friends called him Nate so that's was the name he went by. One day Nate was walking to the tall oak tree looking for something to eat when his friend Tim came and asked him to hoop it up at the main lily pad at the center of the pond. Nate said "OK" as he thought in his mind "what am i doing i suck at B-ball." When they finally made it to the court every one was amazing. They were all varsity players at his school he was obviously out of his league. During the warm up his team mates were draining threes while he could barley make a lay up. A tear ran down his cheek as he realized that he was out of his mind for agreeing to play with these people. It was then when his friend Tim walked up and told him to try his hardest and good things will happen. They were playing a game to 21 and the score was 19-19. The ball was in Nate's hands and he was outside the ark. Every thing got slow as Tim yelled SHOOOOOOT! Nate shot the ball and it hit the rim bounces up hit the back board and finally went in. As this happened he yelled KOBE! It was then that he was the man on the court and he went down in history as big Nate the balla. (THE MORAL OF THE STORY IS BIG THINGS COME IN SMALL PACKAGES AND IF YOUR TRY YOU CAN SUCCEED)

Squirt bottles are very delightful, but they bring out the worst sides in people. For instance the most kind hearted person in the world will feel the need to squirt someone just to see the sheer terror face when they get hit with the cold blast of water. That all i have to say about that.

There once was a turtle who lived in a log down by the river. This turtle was a small fellow in fact all of his turtle friends made fun of him when the would play basket ball on the lily pads. All of his friends called him Nate so that's was the name he went by. One day Nate was walking to the tall oak tree looking for something to eat when his friend Tim came and asked him to hoop it up at the main lily pad at the center of the pond. Nate said "OK" as he thought in his mind "what am i doing i suck at B-ball." When they finally made it to the court every one was amazing. They were all varsity players at his school he was obviously out of his league. During the warm up his team mates were draining threes while he could barley make a lay up. A tear ran down his cheek as he realized that he was out of his mind for agreeing to play with these people. It was then when his friend Tim walked up and told him to try his hardest and good things will happen. They were playing a game to 21 and the score was 19-19. The ball was in Nate's hands and he was outside the ark. Every thing got slow as Tim yelled SHOOOOOOT! Nate shot the ball and it hit the rim bounces up hit the back board and finally went in. As this happened he yelled KOBE! It was then that he was the man on the court and he went down in history as big Nate the balla. (THE MORAL OF THE STORY IS BIG THINGS COME IN SMALL PACKAGES AND IF YOUR TRY YOU CAN SUCCEED)

i am

I am like the wind
being felt round the world
making people happy and sad
destroying things as i may feel.
I am Christmas
Brighton little kids faces
offering major disappointment
I am a white pine
standing tall and straight
offering protection from the storm
and shade from the sun
I am snoopy
an all American icon
people watch me and love me
I am a tattoo
making people forever

TICKET = somthing extra

Well i went to court today... I'm frustrated. The cop knew i didn't do anything wrong he just had to make his ticket quota which is LAME because i did NOT run a red lite. Well i didn't say a work except i accept to the judges question "do you accept the lesser charge of traffic impediment". What ever no points hundred dollar fine it all good. Time for a short story i am about to write....

In Russia there once lived a rat who wanted to dine on fine wines and cheeses. This rats name was Greg. Unfortunately for Greg it was during the rein of Stalin so mother Russia didn't have much of anything. Greg lived in an old prison in the heart of Moscow. This prison was where all of the war criminals stayed during the war. Greg lived under a bunk in cell 113 with an old man who every one called kirney. Kirney had tangled gray hair and two missing fingers which was the result of the butchering he used to do before he was caught. George and Kirney were both good friends and would talk daily about what life would be like outside of prison. One day Kirney was sending a package to his daughter Lindsy who lived in France and Greg hoped into the box when kirney looked over his shoulder at the slop the guard had just shoved through the door. Before Greg knew it he was looking up at Lindsy who screamed and ran away when she realized what she was looking at. It was then when Greg ran around the corner and slipped into a tiny hole that he found under the living room sofa. it was there that he saw what his new life would be like. Greg saw couches a tub and even a kitchen which was tucked away behind the next stud in the wall. Greg realized that he would be living like a king from now on but there was one thing that he needed and that was food. Greg after coming to this conclusion sneaked around the corner and popped onto the counter and grabbed some cheese and took a bucket of wine out of Lindsey's glass. He then took it back to his room and ate like a king for days until about a week later he heard a knock on the door. Greg slowly walked out of his hole and to the edge of the couch. To his demise he saw the exterminator. Greg quickly turned around and ran quickly back to his hole. It only took the exterminator 5 minutes to find Greg and quickly snatched him up and put him in a trap where Greg eventually died. While in the trap before Greg died he realized that he left his true friend Kriney back in Russia and he was getting what he deserved for leaving him alone. (THE MORAL OF THE STORY IS DON'T LEAVE YOUR TRUE FRIENDS FOR WHAT SEEMS TO BE BETTER THINGS BECAUSE YOU MAY REGRET IT LATER)

goldie!!!

I'm a GOLD!!! Being gold is really weird i have never looked at my self as being a rule follower. I am a big person on the issue of respect. I get concerned about people and there problems (i like to help). I value family, home, and tradition. Those three things are a big part of my life. When i read about the gold life style it almost fits me perfectly, although orange also plays a small role. There are times i don't want to be a gold and i test the orange style, but i always end up as a gold in the end. At work i like things to be structured and in place, i like things to roll smoothly and things to happen on time when they don't i tend to get stressed and i need to fix them. I tend to be a little OCD at times it gets annoying, but this is all i can think of so i am gonna write a story about bob the puppy.

Once upon a time there was a puppy named bob. He lived in a meadow of golden Daisy's. He would roll around a listen to the buzzing of the bee's all day long. one day he was rolling abd he tumbled into a gopher hole. He got so scared. Poor bob didnt know what to do. This is when the magical gopher from china appeard. With one chatter of his teeth bob and the gopher were on the moon bouncing in and out of craters. It was on the moon when bob the puppy learned the gophers name was tim. As bob and tim were munching on some chicken that they had packed in a picnic basket and strange sound came from a freashly made crater about 150.654 meters away. Bob and tim slowly but surly moseyed twored the new crater and that is when it happened. A alien with huge pearly white fangs that shined like polished pearls. This is when the alien chomped on there heads and ate them like breakfast. THE END

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SO THIS IS THE BEST THING EVER I AM SOOO HAPPY!