Monday, March 5, 2007

pantoum

As i stumble through the darkness
watching the stars glitter in the sky
my daughter is alone, but not lonely
She is playing with her dollies

Watching the stars glitter in the sky
searching for answers to questions
she is playing with her dollies
I know she is content with what she owns

Searching for the answer to questions
my daughter is alone, but not lonely
I know she is content with what she owns
As i stumble though the darkness

HECK this is pretty bad but i made an attempt

2 comments:

Ms. Eastman said...

It's not bad! Sometimes when you try, you can really surprise yourself.

dayinthelife said...

this is not bad! try to finish it. i want to know how it ends. :)